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Raizo

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PostSubject: Re: Marine Position Registration   Sun Sep 25, 2016 1:47 am

Crew: Marines
Position: Rear Admiral
Tier: F Rank (Frank!)
Activity: I should be pretty active now that i'm no longer in school. I've been able to get on either this account or Radley.
Why: Out of Character I'd kind of like to see some more Marine activity. As it stands right now there are only a small few of the Marine faction that are relatively active. Honestly I feel at kind a disadvantage being both the minority group and being under leveled. I would like to be able to hold my own, but still have room for character growth and progress, that's why I'm going for the Rear Admiral position. That way I have some experience and strength about me, while still having goals to work towards. If that makes sense.
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PostSubject: Re: Marine Position Registration   Sun Sep 25, 2016 11:51 am

Raizo wrote:
Crew: Marines
Position: Rear Admiral
Tier: F Rank (Frank!)
Activity: I should be pretty active now that i'm no longer in school. I've been able to get on either this account or Radley.
Why: Out of Character I'd kind of like to see some more Marine activity. As it stands right now there are only a small few of the Marine faction that are relatively active. Honestly I feel at kind a disadvantage being both the minority group and being under leveled. I would like to be able to hold my own, but still have room for character growth and progress, that's why I'm going for the Rear Admiral position. That way I have some experience and strength about me, while still having goals to work towards. If that makes sense.
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Would've honestly liked to see more of your character's personality from this sample and as such, that was the only hampering factor for me. I see potential however so onto the good part!

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PostSubject: Re: Marine Position Registration   Sun Sep 25, 2016 2:33 pm

Silvers wrote:
Raizo wrote:
Crew: Marines
Position: Rear Admiral
Tier: F Rank (Frank!)
Activity: I should be pretty active now that i'm no longer in school. I've been able to get on either this account or Radley.
Why: Out of Character I'd kind of like to see some more Marine activity. As it stands right now there are only a small few of the Marine faction that are relatively active. Honestly I feel at kind a disadvantage being both the minority group and being under leveled. I would like to be able to hold my own, but still have room for character growth and progress, that's why I'm going for the Rear Admiral position. That way I have some experience and strength about me, while still having goals to work towards. If that makes sense.
Sample:

Here we Go:
 


Would've honestly liked to see more of your character's personality from this sample and as such, that was the only hampering factor for me. I see potential however so onto the good part!

Rear Admiral Awarded
Level 21 Awarded
+3000 Exp.
Reputation 100,000,0000



I'll see what I can do for the future, as I'm still kind of getting back into writing from being away. Thank you for the approval.
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