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PostSubject: Re: Pirate Positions Registration   Sun Sep 13, 2015 12:13 pm


Radley Is given 174 Million Bounty.
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Ninth_Horseman wrote:
I approve. Congrat my friend

Radley wrote:
Crew: Dream Eater Pirates
Position: Supernova
Tier: Tier 1
Activity: I’m usually online whenever my laptop is open. I generally keep the site open and check back periodically through the day. Only future issues might be around big exam weeks like Midterms and Finals week and a couple days where I go visit home or am visited from home.
Why: Radley is a tough as nails guy that loves a good brawl and good food. He seeks to increase his power and strength so that he may one day become a legendary figure to the eyes of the world.  He is a protector for what he believes, whether that be some personal policy or related to his crew, and will fight ( or cook) to protect those ideals. I feel that something that might be kind of eye-catching about Radley is his sheer strength and ruthlessness that he ends up projecting during a fight. With a devilish grin and lots of wicked punches, this is one rookie keep an eye on.

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PostSubject: Re: Pirate Positions Registration   Mon Sep 14, 2015 11:02 pm

Crew: N/A
Position: Supernova.
Tier: Tier 1.
Activity: Almost every day.
Why: I find it to be a nice jump start for me. I'd have most of the basic functions of the RP but I still would have to move my way up. Not only that, but for my character. Kira is immature, cocky, and a pure show off in battle. All the traits that come with a rookie on the seas, which is why this position fits him perfectly. He's made it here by luck and a bit of blood added into the mix. That means he still has a long way to go in the World and will have to face the many challenges that comes with going against most of the World. He has much time to mature and using this as a way to help him mature and learn that he isn't as powerful as he may think.
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PostSubject: Re: Pirate Positions Registration   Sat Sep 19, 2015 9:38 pm

I Think you would be a good addition to the Supernova Family. For the sake of time.. among other things. I hereby approve your Position as Supernova.

+ 124,000,000 Bounty
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Vin wrote:
Crew: N/A
Position: Supernova.
Tier: Tier 1.
Activity: Almost every day.
Why: I find it to be a nice jump start for me. I'd have most of the basic functions of the RP but I still would have to move my way up. Not only that, but for my character. Kira is immature, cocky, and a pure show off in battle. All the traits that come with a rookie on the seas, which is why this position fits him perfectly. He's made it here by luck and a bit of blood added into the mix. That means he still has a long way to go in the World and will have to face the many challenges that comes with going against most of the World. He has much time to mature and using this as a way to help him mature and learn that he isn't as powerful as he may think.
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PostSubject: Re: Pirate Positions Registration   Wed Sep 23, 2015 6:03 pm

Crew: N/A
Position: Supernova
Tier: Tier 1
Activity: 2-8 hours
Why: Masayoshi is a man who believes in freedom to the fullest. He wants to be Pirate King eventually and what Pirate King means to Masayoshi is the ability to have freedom and give freedom to those who don't have it. He knows of dark underbelly of the government and its blind eye/loyalty towards the Celestial Dragons. Masayoshi wants to free the world from the shackles of the World Government, being a Supernova is merely a stepping stone. His strong will and dangerous devil fruit make him a force to be reckoned with.
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PostSubject: Re: Pirate Positions Registration   Sun Sep 27, 2015 2:58 pm

I liked it a lot. A grand Introduction! --Only thing for the future- gol D. Roger does not exist and One Piece does not exist quite yet. Wink (World History)

I hereby Award you with the Position of Super Nova!

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+218,000,000 Beli Bounty


Masayoshi wrote:
Crew: N/A
Position: Supernova
Tier: Tier 1
Activity: 2-8 hours
Why: Masayoshi is a man who believes in freedom to the fullest. He wants to be Pirate King eventually and what Pirate King means to Masayoshi is the ability to have freedom and give freedom to those who don't have it. He knows of dark underbelly of the government and its blind eye/loyalty towards the Celestial Dragons. Masayoshi wants to free the world from the shackles of the World Government, being a Supernova is merely a stepping stone. His strong will and dangerous devil fruit make him a force to be reckoned with.
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PostSubject: Re: Pirate Positions Registration   Sun Sep 27, 2015 5:00 pm

Love it. I cant wait until Emi reads it. HA!

Because of my lack of time... I award you the Position of WARLORD.

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Crew: The Red Devils (Not made just yet but intended to be made.)
Position: (Shichibukai/War Lord)
Tier: (II)
Activity: I can be on almost every day and usually my schedule sometimes allows me to be up through some nights. I can be flexible at times and make it for any events but in the case I have to take an absence, those in authority will know of my absence in advance (unless sudden, which sometimes can't be helped.)
Why: I feel as though it would make for an interesting situation for Franziska and would allow me to not only set her up as a nicely developed Pirate but throughout the RP's I share with others, they could come to know more about the Shichibukai and how she became one of the few of them that roam the world. She could be a considerable help the Marine's as well, perhaps not as much as some Marine Fanatics would be but enough to make a significant difference. She's a woman that seeks fame and aims to live her life to the fullest while it may last. Franziska will definitely interact with other Shichi's and may even livin' some things up.
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PostSubject: Re: Pirate Positions Registration   Mon Sep 28, 2015 3:41 pm

Crew: Legend Crew
Position: Supernova
Tier: Tier 1
Activity: Im on all the time
Why: Originally i was planning on working up to this rank, but that seems to be slightly harder, Anyanka is surely making her name known as of this moment in time, i believe the position of super nova will fit her and her motive, seeing as she loves nothing more than pissing off the marines, shes stolen from them and even in the process of murdering a mayor.
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PostSubject: Re: Pirate Positions Registration   Thu Oct 01, 2015 3:36 pm

Ohoho, good stuff Anyanka! I would have never expected such sadism and cruelty from your face claim (but I suppose that's your intent). Anyway, a good set up. Not the most unique of settings, but a tavern is as good a place as any to have a brawl! I really enjoyed your writing style. You had your own asides as if speaking with an audience and I love that! (very personal). Anyway, the descriptions were great (maybe a bit too detailed on the whole testicle annihilation, but that might just be me). There were only a couple of spelling errors, but there was a pattern of run-on sentences which was somewhat distracting. All-in-all, a really enjoyable read. I would say supernova material Smile
Think we need one other opinion for an approval,though.

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PostSubject: Re: Pirate Positions Registration   Thu Oct 08, 2015 10:17 am

Alright, Hawk, interesting sample. First off, when using another person's character in your threads, make sure you have their permission (as you could be putting words in their mouths they wouldn't normally say, or have them behaving differently, or treating them in ways they would prefer not to be). If you received permission beforehand, that's alright, but if not, then I would suggest you replace said character with another (possibly of your own creation). The encounter was pretty good, but as I have said before: you must analyze your posts carefully before posting. The spelling and grammar became quite confusing (Personally I sometimes avoid sentences with overly complex grammar because I'm not quite sure how to handle them. So, adjusting your sentence choice might be helpful too). With all that in mind I feel if you took a couple of days and cleaned up the sentence structure and the like, then I could probably award you a Supernova position. So, in that time please be patient and perceptive as you overlook the sample. Overall, an enjoyable read Wink

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PostSubject: Re: Pirate Positions Registration   Fri Oct 09, 2015 10:15 am

Oh, pardon me, I thought Emilia was someone's character, that's fine, then. I am quite sorry to keep beating the dead horse with this spelling and grammar thing. I can tell it's getting frustrating, but it really is a hassle to understand some things. I totally agree that One Piece has some weird characters with odd mannerisms, laughs, and speaking habits, but the ones a refer to are often outside of character's speaking sentences as well. The use of more commas and ending punctuation would go a long way, that's all (spelling wasn't too bad, really).

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PostSubject: Re: Pirate Positions Registration   Sat Oct 10, 2015 11:34 am

If you still had more to do on this one, then go right ahead. I would still suggest keeping my pointers in mind and we'll see how it looks after you're done. If it could still use some work after that, then you could wait the 3 days and attempt again. I had cut you off before you finished, so please fulfill your image.

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PostSubject: Re: Pirate Positions Registration   Sat Oct 10, 2015 4:52 pm

http://www.jeweledseas.com/t240-emilia-a-snow-finished
There's no issue in Emilia being used for samples. Just, for future reference if someone wants to use her, refer to the application presented to keep them "in character". In accordance with the written personality, Emilia doesn't seem to be an avidly emotional character in an expressive sense.

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PostSubject: Re: Pirate Positions Registration   Fri Oct 16, 2015 6:44 pm

Mm... well, I literally just wrote in the previous post that if you're going to use another char in your post, keep them in character--especially since there's a written personality already available to strictly adhere to. That being said, the sample is denied until the sample is revised.

Laplace wrote:
http://www.jeweledseas.com/t240-emilia-a-snow-finished
There's no issue in Emilia being used for samples. Just, for future reference if someone wants to use her, refer to the application presented to keep them "in character". In accordance with the written personality, Emilia doesn't seem to be an avidly emotional character in an expressive sense.

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PostSubject: Re: Pirate Positions Registration   Mon Mar 14, 2016 7:23 pm

Crew: N/A
Position: Supernova
Tier: 1
Activity: I can log in daily, however I must invest most of my weekdays into school.
Why: I believe I have a lot to offer to this site. It appears to be no secret that things run a bit slow around here, and though I am just one person I plan to carry the weight of two.

This isn't my first rodeo either. I have been to many sites throughout the years and I plan to continue occupying this site for as long as I'm capable to. From my time here prior to my departure I learned that you're all a good bunch of people and that is what I'm looking to be apart of.
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PostSubject: Re: Pirate Positions Registration   Mon Mar 14, 2016 8:51 pm

Well, thank you,sir, for your prompt response. First off I must say I really enjoyed your Logia sample as well (sorry I was checking the registry to make sure you had earned approval for it,nothing personal just being careful). This is a good sample,my friend, I only have some very slight pointers. For future threads I would suggest a color coding to make it easier to tell who is speaking (pick your favorite color for your character's voice for example). There were only the tiniest of spelling errors, so no real flaw there, but I must point out that 'molten' is an adjective not a noun. Just for your future writings you can have 'molten rock' or a 'molten fist',but a 'layer of molten' doesn't technically make sense. That is quite minor, I just wanted to point it out as you will likely be using said terminology quite often. That is: with your new supernova position!! You did a nice job giving a sense of how your character's destructive tendencies may have lead to significant collateral damage on his journey (thus the infamy). Not to mention the fruit lining up nicely with a hotheaded personality. As it stands the Supernova positions are full, but one of them was simply occupied by one of my NPC bounties. As such, I feel it's well within my rights to evict him and award you said position. Make the most of it.

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PostSubject: Re: Pirate Positions Registration   Mon Mar 14, 2016 9:46 pm

Thank you for the pointers, I will do my best to utilize them in my rps. Also, thank you for making a sacrifice for me; you will not regret it.
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PostSubject: Re: Pirate Positions Registration   Sun Mar 20, 2016 4:10 pm

Crew: N/A
Position: Supernova
Tier: 1
Activity: I'm here almost everyday, just looking to RP.
Why: I actually want to see the site be more active and with some of the story plots I have planned I think I can do so with the Supernova position in all honesty.
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PostSubject: Re: Pirate Positions Registration   Mon Mar 21, 2016 9:15 am

Silvers
I greatly appreciate your desire to reinvigorate this site; I too want that. The posts I have seen you make have been quite enjoyable, I must say. You have a distinct talent at fleshing out the goofiness of your character. His nonchalant persona and actions remind me of real One Piece characters and I love that. I think I would really appreciate seeing your style making an impact on these seas. You only had some very minor spelling slip-ups (unless his eyes actually "pooped" XP). Anyway, that is a truly minuscule complaint and I wouldn't worry about it. In my book you have a splendid style and I think you deserve a reward for that. I'll remove one of the NPC Super Novas and offer you a placement (a player character will always be more valuable than an NPC).

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PostSubject: Re: Pirate Positions Registration   Tue Mar 29, 2016 2:00 pm

Crew: N/A
Position: I was told a position nor reputation isn't mandatory for this, so N/A
Tier: 1
Activity: I can usually log in everyday, though weekdays I'm usually in school.
Why: I happen to enjoy the relaxed and open nature of the website, so I'd like to develop my character while trying to expand on the canon world itself through the use of various martial arts tournament arcs and such ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Pirate Positions Registration   Thu Mar 31, 2016 8:55 am

Kamina
Well,done! That was beautifully described. I could clearly picture the dojo and got a sense of its history along with the sense of history and ritual between master and apprentice (very cute dynamic). Few people are able to describe combat as succinctly as that (sometimes its just a garble of activity,but this was clear-cut and defined: like I was watching it!). There were barely noticeable spelling slip ups, but that's hardly anything against your pluses, here. My only real disappointment was that her master was not literally a "lizard hermit". I was picturing the tail and the tongue and everything! XS Anyway, this was a splendid sample for character, setting and combat alike. I feel somewhat remiss for not being able to award this some sort of title (we could really use another playable Warlord, hint hint Surprised ),but if that's really what you want I can just give you the levels (and if you wanted the bounty/reputation as well, let me know). I really enjoyed this regardless.


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PostSubject: Re: Pirate Positions Registration   Wed Jun 15, 2016 7:25 pm

I Absolutely Love it- It is the first of many Good tales to come, I am very Impressed and Pleased with this Character and Writing!

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Carmine D Snow wrote:
Crew: N/A
Position: Warlord
Tier: TBD (To be determined)
Activity: On/Off but hopefully more active now.
Why: I feel like I could contribute both a lot to the active storyline with the help of the administration and through character development with new players and currently active ones from long ago. All in all I want to bring a layer of depth to the story we're all trying to create here as well as try to bring something new to the table in terms of character!
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PostSubject: Re: Pirate Positions Registration   Sun Aug 28, 2016 2:21 pm


Crew: Former king of Sandra kingdom ( N/A)
Position: supernova
Tier: 1
Activity: school don't start back for four weeks so alot
Why: Because I'm the real deal. Y'all would never have a supernova like me

NPC in here are made for the sample vice admiral rear admirals and Mafia boss and yes the Royal family of Sandra Also most of the PC supernovas haven't been on in months Blake since last year.

Skai
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PostSubject: Re: Pirate Positions Registration   Sat Sep 03, 2016 7:55 pm

I regret to inform you that there is no Super Nova Positions at this time. you will have to wait until a Position is Available to apply. Try again at a later date.


TrillionTrillaTunka wrote:

Crew: Former king of Sandra kingdom ( N/A)
Position: supernova
Tier: 1
Activity: school don't start back for four weeks so alot
Why: Because I'm the real deal. Y'all would never have a supernova like me

NPC in here are made for the sample vice admiral rear admirals and Mafia boss and yes the Royal family of Sandra Also most of the PC supernovas haven't been on in months Blake since last year.

Skai
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Marvel
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PostSubject: Re: Pirate Positions Registration   Fri Sep 23, 2016 9:48 pm


Crew: N/A
Position: Supernova
Tier: F
Activity: Very - This is an alt for my main account which is also fairly active (Lillie Elric)
Why: IC Reasons: To spread the word of his God with his reputation as well as be strong enough to defend it if need be.
OOC Reasons: Because many characters / NPCs are exclusively higher tiers / levels making it very hard to start properly from level 0 and Pirates have many positions opening up due to inactivity.
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PostSubject: Re: Pirate Positions Registration   Sat Sep 24, 2016 1:33 am

Takuji wrote:

Crew: N/A
Position: Supernova
Tier: F
Activity: Very - This is an alt for my main account which is also fairly active (Lillie Elric)
Why: IC Reasons: To spread the word of his God with his reputation as well as be strong enough to defend it if need be.
OOC Reasons: Because many characters / NPCs are exclusively higher tiers / levels making it very hard to start properly from level 0 and Pirates have many positions opening up due to inactivity.
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Approved. I like that your dialogue, sense of setting, characters and realism(as far as the OP world is concerned) could've been visualized. Understand, Supernova positions, much like those of past and present will only be partially approved based on activity of the user. If you're activity slips without indication, i.e. notice in the goodbye/welcome section, I'll use due jurisdiction. World Positions give you weight as some of the main characters in the site plot etc, so whole this with pride.

Anyway, onto the good part!

Level 25 Awarded.
A Class Weapon Awarded - Must be registered in equipment shop.
Awarded 4,300 Exp
Bounty: 110,000,000
Beli: Spoils from Marine HQ Raid +1,000,000 Beli

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