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Lucky Wilshire

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PostSubject: Re: Pirate Positions Registration   Thu Mar 31, 2016 8:55 am

Kamina
Well,done! That was beautifully described. I could clearly picture the dojo and got a sense of its history along with the sense of history and ritual between master and apprentice (very cute dynamic). Few people are able to describe combat as succinctly as that (sometimes its just a garble of activity,but this was clear-cut and defined: like I was watching it!). There were barely noticeable spelling slip ups, but that's hardly anything against your pluses, here. My only real disappointment was that her master was not literally a "lizard hermit". I was picturing the tail and the tongue and everything! XS Anyway, this was a splendid sample for character, setting and combat alike. I feel somewhat remiss for not being able to award this some sort of title (we could really use another playable Warlord, hint hint Surprised ),but if that's really what you want I can just give you the levels (and if you wanted the bounty/reputation as well, let me know). I really enjoyed this regardless.


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PostSubject: Re: Pirate Positions Registration   Wed Jun 15, 2016 9:59 am

Crew: N/A
Position: Warlord
Tier: TBD (To be determined)
Activity: On/Off but hopefully more active now.
Why: I feel like I could contribute both a lot to the active storyline with the help of the administration and through character development with new players and currently active ones from long ago. All in all I want to bring a layer of depth to the story we're all trying to create here as well as try to bring something new to the table in terms of character!
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The Arrival (1,492 WC):
 
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Azure Snow
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Position : Marine Captain
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PostSubject: Re: Pirate Positions Registration   Wed Jun 15, 2016 7:25 pm

I Absolutely Love it- It is the first of many Good tales to come, I am very Impressed and Pleased with this Character and Writing!

+55 Levels [29,100 EXP]
http://www.jeweledseas.com/t81-leveling-system


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340,000,000

+'S' Class Nodachi, 'S' Class Piece of Equipment

http://www.jeweledseas.com/t753-weapon-and-equipment-information

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Carmine D Snow wrote:
Crew: N/A
Position: Warlord
Tier: TBD (To be determined)
Activity: On/Off but hopefully more active now.
Why: I feel like I could contribute both a lot to the active storyline with the help of the administration and through character development with new players and currently active ones from long ago. All in all I want to bring a layer of depth to the story we're all trying to create here as well as try to bring something new to the table in terms of character!
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The Arrival (1,492 WC):
 

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TrillionTrillaTunka

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PostSubject: Re: Pirate Positions Registration   Sun Aug 28, 2016 2:21 pm


Crew: Former king of Sandra kingdom ( N/A)
Position: supernova
Tier: 1
Activity: school don't start back for four weeks so alot
Why: Because I'm the real deal. Y'all would never have a supernova like me

NPC in here are made for the sample vice admiral rear admirals and Mafia boss and yes the Royal family of Sandra Also most of the PC supernovas haven't been on in months Blake since last year.

Skai
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PostSubject: Re: Pirate Positions Registration   Sat Sep 03, 2016 7:55 pm

I regret to inform you that there is no Super Nova Positions at this time. you will have to wait until a Position is Available to apply. Try again at a later date.


TrillionTrillaTunka wrote:

Crew: Former king of Sandra kingdom ( N/A)
Position: supernova
Tier: 1
Activity: school don't start back for four weeks so alot
Why: Because I'm the real deal. Y'all would never have a supernova like me

NPC in here are made for the sample vice admiral rear admirals and Mafia boss and yes the Royal family of Sandra Also most of the PC supernovas haven't been on in months Blake since last year.

Skai
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Marvel
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Natsuko Nonomura

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PostSubject: Re: Pirate Positions Registration   Fri Sep 23, 2016 9:48 pm


Crew: N/A
Position: Supernova
Tier: F
Activity: Very - This is an alt for my main account which is also fairly active (Lillie Elric)
Why: IC Reasons: To spread the word of his God with his reputation as well as be strong enough to defend it if need be.
OOC Reasons: Because many characters / NPCs are exclusively higher tiers / levels making it very hard to start properly from level 0 and Pirates have many positions opening up due to inactivity.
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Silvers

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PostSubject: Re: Pirate Positions Registration   Sat Sep 24, 2016 1:33 am

Takuji wrote:

Crew: N/A
Position: Supernova
Tier: F
Activity: Very - This is an alt for my main account which is also fairly active (Lillie Elric)
Why: IC Reasons: To spread the word of his God with his reputation as well as be strong enough to defend it if need be.
OOC Reasons: Because many characters / NPCs are exclusively higher tiers / levels making it very hard to start properly from level 0 and Pirates have many positions opening up due to inactivity.
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Approved. I like that your dialogue, sense of setting, characters and realism(as far as the OP world is concerned) could've been visualized. Understand, Supernova positions, much like those of past and present will only be partially approved based on activity of the user. If you're activity slips without indication, i.e. notice in the goodbye/welcome section, I'll use due jurisdiction. World Positions give you weight as some of the main characters in the site plot etc, so whole this with pride.

Anyway, onto the good part!

Level 25 Awarded.
A Class Weapon Awarded - Must be registered in equipment shop.
Awarded 4,300 Exp
Bounty: 110,000,000
Beli: Spoils from Marine HQ Raid +1,000,000 Beli
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Kaijo Okinaga

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PostSubject: Re: Pirate Positions Registration   Mon Sep 26, 2016 2:38 am

Crew: N/a Atm
Position: supernova
Tier: F
Activity: Very active.
Why: Lookin' for a spoopin' good time, figured I could do a lot from this position. Also figured a certain Yonko was hunting Supernovas, wouldn't mind fighting one later down the line.
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Silvers

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PostSubject: Re: Pirate Positions Registration   Tue Sep 27, 2016 10:26 am

Kaijo Okinaga wrote:
Crew: N/a Atm
Position: supernova
Tier: F
Activity: Very active.
Why: Lookin' for a spoopin' good time, figured I could do a lot from this position. Also figured a certain Yonko was hunting Supernovas, wouldn't mind fighting one later down the line.
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It was an insightful read honestly I have no qualms. The story development was a little drab at points but for the most part it was basically up quite standards.

Bounty: 150,000,000 Bonus
Level 30
Experience: 6,200 Exp Awarded
A Rank Equipment Redeemable
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Silvers

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PostSubject: Re: Pirate Positions Registration   Wed Sep 28, 2016 6:03 am

TrillionTrillaTunka wrote:

Crew: Former king of Sandra kingdom ( N/A)
Position: supernova
Tier: 1
Activity: school don't start back for four weeks so alot
Why: Because I'm the real deal. Y'all would never have a supernova like me

NPC in here are made for the sample vice admiral rear admirals and Mafia boss and yes the Royal family of Sandra Also most of the PC supernovas haven't been on in months Blake since last year.

Skai
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Marvel
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As painful as it was to read at times due to the choice of grammar and phrasing, it was actually enjoyable tbh. My only thing is everything he's done in his career outshines being a Supernova in all quite honesty. Your stories scope while being good, is too grandiose. No way a former Warlord could be a Supernova, he's no longer a rookie, defeats the point of the title. However, it leaves me with the odd predicament of what to do, my decisions is as follows:

I won't make give you the title of Supernova.
220,000,000 Bounty Awarded
Title: Paradise Pirate Awarded
Level: 29
Exp: 5900
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PostSubject: Re: Pirate Positions Registration   Sat Oct 08, 2016 12:17 am

I feel like i get easily replaced around here. That's probably bad karma for being away. As bothersome as it is i'll just do this again too.

Crew: Dream Eater Pirates
Position: Supernova
Tier: 1?
Activity: Can get on in the minimun once a day.
Why: Want to get back up in the ranks with other pirates.
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PostSubject: Re: Pirate Positions Registration   Sat Oct 08, 2016 3:11 am

Heartsmith wrote:
I feel like i get easily replaced around here. That's probably bad karma for being away. As bothersome as it is i'll just do this again too.

Crew: Dream Eater Pirates
Position: Supernova
Tier: 1?
Activity: Can get on in the minimun once a day.
Why: Want to get back up in the ranks with other pirates.
Sample:

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I'll permit this reinstatement as a Supernova, I'll keep my eyes on you. Current levels remain the same, position permitted.
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