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Hiroko
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PostSubject: Yog-Sathoth's Illusion   Tue May 02, 2017 9:04 pm

Skill Set Name: Yog-Sathoth's Illusion
Classifications: Master/Striker
Skill Set Information: A branch of Yog-Sathoth's power is to play with people's mind and sigh. He gave Hiroko the power to manipulate the enemy's mind to create sigh illusions to allow him easier close combat.
Passives:
-Simple Illusions: Hiroko is able to create little figures with his hand. These figueres are illusions and have no more use than playing with civilians or to enjoy watching a bird.

Skill Set Strengths:
-If the user has more will power and intelligence than the enemy's will and intelligence respectivly, he is able to break optical illusion (if not optical, he can only notice it's an illusion but can't avoid it). This can only be used to ignore the illusion himself, he can't help allies to ignore it.
Skill Set Weakness:
-If the enemy's intelligence and will, both, are stronger than Hiroko's, illusions are not effective as he can predict them and ignore them.

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PostSubject: Re: Yog-Sathoth's Illusion   Wed May 10, 2017 1:42 am


Please see my Bold sections for issues and Italics for comments/suggestions.


Hiroko wrote:
Skill Set Name: Soul Materialization
Classifications: Striker/Master
Skill Set Information: Hiroko is able to materialize his own soul as well as souls from other people. Souls Hiroko materializes can look like black and white auras or copies of the target. This skill can be used in two ways, the first being by materializing his own soul to perform attacks and strikes. The second one is materializing other people's souls to strike them or cause other similar effects.
Passives:
Soul Projection: Hiroko is able to project his soul as an aura. This soul can only be seen by powered humans and living beings.

Skill Set Strengths:
-Hiroko gains the ability to strike enemies multiple times by materializing soul attacks. For example, he can materialize his soul as a third arm to strike the enemy.
-Hiroko can debuff enemies by damaging their soul and causing soul injuries. These injuries can cause different type of damage in the targets body and are usually more difficult to treat. Most of these injuries can only close with time or other powers.
-Hiroko has the power to materialize enemy souls to basically betray them. He can command their souls to leave, hold back or even strike their owners.
Skill Set Weakness:
-Huge lack of range. Because of souls being limited to someones body, their range can not usually extend more than 5 meters.
-Low versatility. Even when being able to cause different debuffs and strikes, that is basically all he can do. He has no elemental differences between attacks nor range variations. Most attacks fall in one of the 3 strength categories.


I am going to be up-front and say that this entire skill-set will need to be re-worked or you need to have your classifications changed to match it: Affecting and manipulating souls as well as materializing them is a Breaker ability rather than Striker although the Master half fits well enough. Please read over our Classifications page again and try to tailor your skill set to align more with what your classifications are actually capable of.

While you do not have to follow strictly with the examples given per each Classification, you need to keep in mind what each is roughly capable of and contact a member of Staff if you are uncertain.


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PostSubject: Re: Yog-Sathoth's Illusion   Wed May 10, 2017 10:17 am

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