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PostSubject: The Caged Vigilante   Sat Apr 29, 2017 12:26 am

Skill Set Name: The Caged Vigilante
Classifcations: Brute,Striker and Blaster
Skill Set Information:
The Cage Vigilante skill set will focus more on the Brute and Striker class of the user. These skills are mainly used for defensive and support purposes to help the user stay up and fighting as long as he can in combat. The Brute side of the skills will specialize in keeping the user and or others secured. The Striker side helps the user fight off enemies with a same and lower levels than him. While the least focused Blaster class is used to stand his ground towards enemies that have acquired distance against him.
Passives:
Battle Ready:
Due to the primary focus on the Brute Class it will grant the user +10 Defense and Health which will last for 3 post after his fist technique has been used. When the 3 posts are done both his Defense and Health stats will revert back to normal.

Skill Set Strengths:
Cause of his style of techniques it helps him fight enemies close to mid range. The user has techniques that focus on enduring and dealing crowd control against enemies.
Skill Set Weakness:
Due to these being mostly wreckless physical attacks towards the enemy any person with a relatively high Inteligence and/or Perception can counter most of these moves. The user is left very easily targetable towards any kind distance weapons such as slingshots,bows,pistols,etc.

Technique Name: Tortured Cries
Technique Rank D
Technique Focus Defense
Technique Classification(s) Brute
Technique's Duration 1 Post
Technique Description:
The user will obtain +20 Defense towards physical proyectiles only and it will last for a total of 1 post. Any type of magic or plasma like substances will be completely unaffected by the Defense Boost.

Technique Name: Devil's Touch
Technique Rank D
Technique Focus Will
Technique Classification(s) Striker
Technique's Duration 1 Post
Technique Description: When the user gets on contact the enemy he will emanate aura which in turn will cause the enemy to go through "fear" which will cause enemies to move away from his for 1 post. However this can be easily countered if the enemy has a higher Will or Inteligence than the user.

Technique Name: Sudden Shock
Technique Rank D
Technique Focus Energy
Technique Classification(s)  Blaster
Technique's Duration 3 Post
Technique Description:  The user places an electric bullet inside of his gun that slows the target by -5 speed and reaches 8 meters. The technique is useless if the user doesn't have any type of sidearm on hand. The technique is used primarily to slow down the enemy so the user can get close enough to initiate the a hit toward them. The electric bullet speed will equal half of the user's current speed stat.


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PostSubject: Re: The Caged Vigilante   Mon May 01, 2017 2:16 pm


See my Bold sections for issues and the italics for suggestions.

Secondly, please go through and spell/grammar check your application so that it is more legible.

Heartsmith wrote:
Skill Set Name: The Caged Vigilante
Classifcations: Brute,Striker and Blaster
Skill Set Information:
This skill set focuses on the Brute and Striker class of the user. These skills are mainly used to defend and help the user stay up and fighting as long and they can in combat. The Brute side of the skills specialize in keeping the user and or others secured. The Striker side is used as a balance towards enemies similar in strenght as him. While the least focused Blaster class is used to stand his ground towards enemies that have acquired distance against him.
Passives:
Battle Ready:
Due to the focusing mainly on his Brute class he can take damage more damage than a normal person such as strong kicks and punches or slices with small weapons like daggers. - Please elaborate on what actual bonuses this gives: Does it grant a defensive bonus against physical types of damage? How much? Does this also apply to magic-type abilities such as Blaster energy or Tinker tech type lasers/weapons? Be thorough as possible.

Skill Set Strengths:
Cause of his style of techniques it helps him fight enemies close to mid range. The user has techniques that focus on enduring and dealing crowd control against enemies.
Skill Set Weakness:
Due to these being mostly wreckless physical attacks towards the enemy any person with a relatively high Inteligence and/or Perception can counter most of these moves. The user is left very easily targetable towards any kind distance weapons such as slingshots,bows,pistols,etc.

Technique Name: Tortured Cries
Technique Rank B
Technique Focus Defense
Technique Classification(s) Brute
Technique's Duration 1 Post and a 3 Post Cooldown
Technique Description:
The technique causes the user to become temporarily resistant towards bullets or any other physical type of projectiles for 1 Post. The technique is however completely vulnerable to lasers. - Please elaborate on this, does it grant immunity to a certain rank of attack? Or does it merely grant a boost in defense? This needs to be clear so its effect in combat are known.

Technique Name: Devil's Touch
Technique Rank C
Technique Focus Will
Technique Classification(s) Striker
Technique's Duration 1 Post
Technique Description: When the user of this technique get's punched or touched he will start to emit a dark aura which in turn will fear the victim responsable for it causing the victim to become unable to target the user for 1 Post. This technique will only apply once per person. - How does a target resist the Fear? Do they need Will equal to or higher than the users own? Does it cause them to move away? Be clear on this as with before.

Technique Name: Sudden Shock
Technique Rank D
Technique Focus Energy
Technique Classification(s)  Blaster
Technique's Duration 1 Post
Technique Description:  The user places a electric bullet inside of his gun that slows the target by -5 speed and reaches 8 meters. The technique is useless if the user doesn't have a sidearm on hand. The technique is used primarily to slow down the enemy so the user can get close enough to initiate the battle.

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PostSubject: Re: The Caged Vigilante   Mon May 01, 2017 10:45 pm

Bump, Fixed marked areas and did best to correct grammar and errors. Forgive me if grammar is still a little bad, english isn't my strong language.
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PostSubject: Re: The Caged Vigilante   Thu May 04, 2017 12:56 am


Heartsmith wrote:
Skill Set Name: The Caged Vigilante
Classifcations: Brute,Striker and Blaster
Skill Set Information:
The Cage Vigilante skill set will focus more on the Brute and Striker class of the user. These skills are mainly used for defensive and support purposes to help the user stay up and fighting as long as he can in combat. The Brute side of the skills will specialize in keeping the user and or others secured. The Striker side helps the user fight off enemies with a same and lower levels than him. While the least focused Blaster class is used to stand his ground towards enemies that have acquired distance against him.
Passives:
Battle Ready:
Due to the primary focus on the Brute Class it will grant the user +10 Defense and Health which will last for 3 post after his fist technique has been used. When the 3 posts are done both his Defense and Health stats will revert back to normal.

Skill Set Strengths:
Cause of his style of techniques it helps him fight enemies close to mid range. The user has techniques that focus on enduring and dealing crowd control against enemies.
Skill Set Weakness:
Due to these being mostly wreckless physical attacks towards the enemy any person with a relatively high Inteligence and/or Perception can counter most of these moves. The user is left very easily targetable towards any kind distance weapons such as slingshots,bows,pistols,etc.

Technique Name: Tortured Cries
Technique Rank D
Technique Focus Defense
Technique Classification(s) Brute
Technique's Duration 1 Post
Technique Description:
The user will obtain +20 Defense towards physical proyectiles only and it will last for a total of 1 post. Any type of magic or plasma like substances will be completely unaffected by the Defense Boost.

Technique Name: Devil's Touch
Technique Rank D
Technique Focus Will
Technique Classification(s) Striker
Technique's Duration 1 Post
Technique Description: When the user gets on contact the enemy he will emanate aura which in turn will cause the enemy to go through "fear" which will cause enemies to move away from his for 1 post. However this can be easily countered if the enemy has a higher Will or Inteligence than the user.

Technique Name: Sudden Shock
Technique Rank D
Technique Focus Energy
Technique Classification(s)  Blaster
Technique's Duration 3 Post
Technique Description:  The user places an electric bullet inside of his gun that slows the target by -5 speed and reaches 8 meters. The technique is useless if the user doesn't have any type of sidearm on hand. The technique is used primarily to slow down the enemy so the user can get close enough to initiate the a hit toward them. The electric bullet speed will equal half of the user's current speed stat.

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