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PostSubject: Omen Seer   Tue Mar 07, 2017 10:42 pm



Full Name: Omen Seer
Alias/Epithet: Farseer
Age: 200
Gender: Male
Race: Faery
Sexuality: Omni-Sexual (If he falls in love with someone it doesn't mater if there male, female, beast-man, or demon, etc.)
God: Aurum, Goddess of destiny
Origin: Ventari
Crafting: N/A
Class: Tactician



General Appearance:
Omen Is a beautiful androgynous male fey. His face is soft like a woman with gentle sky blue eyes, smooth features, and long eyelashes. He’s most defining characteristics are his cheekbones, narrow jaw, soft pale lips, and deep eyes. Omen has a very slim build with toned muscles but with his continued soft appearance unless you touched his body you would think there was no muscle at all. Omen’s arms are slender like the rest of him that end in small hands with long fingers and clean large nails. Most of his height comes from his long legs that end in somewhat small feet even for his body and lead to a defined ass.

Omen normally wears cloth clothing that appears to be of high quality and have an almost military style. His normal attire is a white button-up shirt under a white dress coat with 12 gold buttons running up its center, a black tie, black gold cuffs and collar, and a black belt with a gold buckle around his waist. With plain white dress pants, thigh high flat heel boots, white plain gloves, and a white cloak felt held on by a gold brooch finishes off his normal attire.

Hair Color: White
Eye Color: Deep sky blue
Skin Tone: snow white
Height: 5'7
Weight: 110lbs
Tattoo: None



Personality:
Omen is an aloof watcher to most, he gives the appearance of an spaced out elf just watching things go by. But in actuality, he is watching every detail as not to miss anything new or strange. He has always watched from afar the world of men but until recently has never been face to face with them, so he keeps a close eye on everyone and everything in both excitement and caution. Omen appears somewhat shy or cold to most people because he doesn't talk much or when he does ints in a soft tone, which in turn also makes him seem meek. But Omen is not what he appears, in truth omen is a cold, logical, Tactician.

He has watched the acks of many from afar and has learned how beings act, he has seen their kindness, their cruelty, and their cunning. Omen uses the appearance of an aloof idiot to lower the guard of people so he can see their true colors when they think no one's watching. Omen will use anyone and anything in any situation to their utmost use and once they have played their part will push them aside and move onto his next plan. He is not cruel thought, he will not toy with someone's heart, if and when he plan's to work with someone he reveals his true nature and places everything in the open.
If they are of use then he will keep them close and happy but once there use has run out he will leave them behind.

Even with his somewhat harsh personality, Omen still has this strange charisma that pulls people to him. Those who know his true colder yet reassuring side trust his judgments and follow him into battle. Omen lives by the law of freedom of order. Everything has a place but everything is free to choose whether to accept their destiny or to fight it in vain.

Personality Quirks: Floating away. Omen is normally flying so anytime he's on the ground and not focusing he will begin to start floating towards the sky. Also has a weakness for small, cute animals.
Likes: Good Music, Art, Reading
Dislikes: Bad smells, Bad Music, Storms
Motivations: To See the world
Fears: Tight places, Lightning, Big flying things.


Home Town: The Fae's forest
Character History:


Face Claim: Art By Sakimichan, DA
Spoiler:
 
Voice Claim: N/A


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PostSubject: Re: Omen Seer   Wed Mar 08, 2017 1:48 am

Your application has been denied, please see my reasoning below and correct the problems and respond to this application when you are finished:


  1. You must list an age for your character, if you cannot find documentation on the exact life-span of the race you are choosing, you are free to enter an age that you feel appropriate but you cannot simply have this listed as: "?".
  2. You do not need to list that you are androgynous in your Gender section of the application, simply list the biological gender of your character and leave it at that. The Description is where you put such information.
  3. As stated in the Rules section of the site's information area, section which can be found here - Section C5 States clearly:
    Rules wrote:

    You Must have acceptable Grammar and Spelling in order to role play on this site. If you do not correct the Grammar and /Or Spelling in Applications as well as in your posts on the site There will be a Denial of Applications, Tasks, And other things that you want looked over.

    It is clear reading this application that you do not currently have acceptable levels of either of these, and so I will ask that you re-write all sections to be within acceptable levels before they are looked over again.


Deal with these issues and I will revisit your application, until then consider this denied on the previously mentioned grounds.
Omen Seer wrote:


Full Name: Omen Seer
Alias/Epithet: Farseer
Age: ? {Could not find a Faery's life span}
Gender: Androgynous Male
Race: Faery
Sexuality: Omni-Sexual (If he falls in love with someone it doesn't mater if there male, female, beast-man, or demon, etc.)
God: Aurum, Goddess of destiny
Origin: Ventari
Crafting: N/A
Class: Tactician



General Appearance: 
Omen Is a beautiful androgynous male fey. His face is soft like a woman with gentle sky blue eyes, smooth featchers, and long eyelashes. He’s most defined characteristics are his cheekbones, narrow jaw,  soft pale lips, and deep eyes. Omen has a very slim build with toned muscles but with his continued soft appearance unless you touched his body you would think there was no muscle at all. Omen’s arms are slender like the rest of him that end in small hands with long fingers and clean large nails. Most of his height comes from his long legs that end in some what small feet even for his body and lead to a defined ass.
Omen normally wears cloth clothing that appears to be of high quality and have a almost military stile. His normal attire is a white button up shirt under a white dress coat with 12 gold buttons running up its center, a black tie, black gold cuffs and collar, and a black belt with a gold buckle around his waist. With plain white dress pants, thigh high flat heel boots, white plain gloves, and a white cloak felt held on by a gold brooch finishes off his normal attire.

Hair Color: White
Eye Color: Deep sky blue
Skin Tone: snow white
Height: 5'7
Weight: 110lbs
Tattoo: None



Personality:
Omen is an aloof watcher to most, he gives the appearance of an spaced out elf just watching things go by. But in actuality he is watching every detail as not to miss anything new or strange. He has always watched from afar the world of men but until recently has never been face to face with them, so he keeps a close eye on everyone and everything in both excitement and caution. Omen appears somewhat shy or cold to most people because he doesn't talk much or when he does ints in a soft tone, which in turn also makes him seem meek. But Omen is not what he appears, in truth omen is a cold, logical, Tactician. 
He has watched the acks of many from afar and has learned how beings act, he has seen their kindness, their cruelty, and there cunning.  Omen uses the appearance of a aloof idiot to lower the guard of people so he can see there true colors when they think no one's watching. Omen will use anyone and anything in any situation to their utmost  use and once they have played their part will push them aside and move on to his next plain. He is not cruel thought, he will not toy with someone's heart, if and when we plains to work with someone he reveals his true nature and places everything in the open. 
If they are of use then he will keep them close and happy but once there use has run out he will leave them behind. Even with this somewhat harsh personality Omen still has this strange charisma that pull's people to him and makes those who know his true side trust his judgments and will fallow him into battle. Omen lives by the law of freedom of order. Everything has a place but everything is free to choose whether to accept their destiny or to fight it in vain.

Personality Quirks: Floating away. Omen is normally flying so anytime hes on the ground and not focusing he will begin to start floating towards the sky. Also has a weaknes for small, cute animals. 
Likes: Good Music, Art, Reading
Dislikes: Bad smells, Bad Music, Storms 
Motivations: To See the world
Fears: Tight places, Lightning, Big flying things.


Home Town: The Fae's forest
Character History:


Face Claim: Art By Sakimichan, DA
Spoiler:
 
Voice Claim: N/A
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PostSubject: Re: Omen Seer   Wed Mar 08, 2017 2:05 am

Age Fixed, Gender Fixed, I would like more clarification on the spell/grammar, I use a spelling and grammar checker and nothing seems wrong.
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