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PostSubject: Bloody Rose ( Ebony)   Thu Feb 23, 2017 9:59 pm

Name: Bloody Rose
Type: Weapon
Class: B
Length: The gun is the size of a 40. glock
Weight: 2 lbs
Description: The gun is a very powerful weapon which can fire rounds of bullets made by the elements. Each set of rounds will have they respected effects placed on the targets. Meaning a fire round of bullets could leave the target burned or a lightening round of bullets could shock them.



Strengths: The user is not summoning his elements but they have been made for him. Each set comes with it's elements strengths.


Weaknesses: The bullets could be stopped by his elements weakness.

Stronger weapons or armour could stop the bullets. ( must be 1 rank higher than the user.)

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PostSubject: Re: Bloody Rose ( Ebony)   Thu Feb 23, 2017 10:00 pm

Keep in mines I paid for this

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PostSubject: Re: Bloody Rose ( Ebony)   Fri Feb 24, 2017 1:18 am

Keep in "minds" that just because you bought it doesn't mean it won't be nerfed.

For each sentence, I want you to go and ask yourself "Would datboi approve of this?" and edit what you think I won't approve to a state in which I will. Reply when you think I will approve.

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PostSubject: Re: Bloody Rose ( Ebony)   Fri Feb 24, 2017 8:11 am

What wrong with this I ask you to just grade it because I'm not on yo head you acting like this is op or something compare to people class B weapons that cut through magic this is pretty on point BUMP

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PostSubject: Re: Bloody Rose ( Ebony)   Fri Feb 24, 2017 8:46 am

And please look at what B rank weapons could do before you injusticely grade my stuff boi
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PostSubject: Re: Bloody Rose ( Ebony)   Fri Feb 24, 2017 3:27 pm

Prankster wrote:
Name: Bloody Rose
Type: Weapon
Class: B
Length: The gun is the size of a 40. glock
Weight: 2 lbs
Description: The gun is a very power weapon of light and darkness. Given that it fires off a fusion of both magics. The gun emperor form is it's true tier form. As it becomes a blood shot rose whom vines wrap around the user arm. The vines even moved on its own. When emperor form is in play it must kill to turn back to normal.[1*]
[*1] What does the gun/vines do to the user if it doesn't turn back to normal? Can it kill anything? Animals or humans?

Strengths: The gun use light and dark magic to make it's bullets from. Meaning this is a very deadly weapon to demons and angelic beings.

Give a clear stat buff. If you're saying, against these specific races, the gun is stronger, then give a buff to your Attack. You already receive a +30 Atk when you use your B Ranked weapon, so I would think a +10 would be good here.

The gun fire could repeal others attacks
How? I don't imagine you can just shoot a bullet and stop a wide ranged Area of effect spell just because. Could you elaborate or give better reasoning?

The gun can gain power by using the user blood Hp or his very life hp.
Give a cap for how much HP you can trade in order to gain attack. State clearly that the amount of HP you trade is the amount of Atk you receive.


Weaknesses: The gun is only as strong as the user magic
Firstly: your magic is your atk in this sense. Secondly, you're saying your gun is only as strong as your atk, which isn't really a weakness

The gun if drawn must be used or it can not return to it sealed formed. This will drain the user magHp.
Mention how much HP it drains while active. Does this count for a boost to your atk, as mentioned above? How often does it take HP?

If the user uses up his magic than the gun will start using his Hp.
Are you saying that, besides the HP drain mentioned above, whenever you use a skill the gun takes even more HP? How much HP does it take per skill?

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PostSubject: Re: Bloody Rose ( Ebony)   Fri Feb 24, 2017 5:43 pm

Bump this sure do

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PostSubject: Re: Bloody Rose ( Ebony)   Sat Feb 25, 2017 3:45 pm

This weapon might go to my new character

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PostSubject: Re: Bloody Rose ( Ebony)   Thu Mar 16, 2017 4:34 am

Bump this is ready Ziro is made

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PostSubject: Re: Bloody Rose ( Ebony)   Thu Mar 16, 2017 5:34 am

Fix the grammar and spelling on your application, until this is done, it cannot be checked.

Prankster wrote:
Name: Bloody Rose
Type: Weapon
Class: B
Length: The gun is the size of a 40. glock
Weight: 2 lbs
Description: The gun is a very power weapon of light and darkness. Given that it fires off a fusion of both magics. The gun emperor form is it's true tier form. As it becomes a blood shot rose whom vines wrap around the user arm. The vines even moved on its own. When emperor form is in play it must kill to turn back to normal. For the most part the emperor form is a only if it's 100% the only option left. If Trillion can not get the gun to be sealed in time ( meaning his post from which he actived it.) The vines will without a doubt bind Trillion down not only draining Hp per post but keeping him from breaking out. This could be only avoided by Trillion if he was to deliver a deadly blow to whom ever he pointed his gun at either seriously injuring them or killing them.The bind will take 5 post to complete. Bloody Rose could add on attachments.

Bloody Rose effective starting to take place.


Bloody Rose seal form


Bloody Rose Big Bang Attack




Strengths: The gun use light and dark magic to make it's bullets from. Meaning this is a very deadly weapon to demons and angelic beings.  going up against dark and light elements gives the user a 10+ attack bouns

The gun fire could repeal others attacks
This only apply if the user speed and def is more than the targets. No he can not repeal full blow  high tier spells.
But what I mean is the user can repeal small attacks such as low rank spells that target only single people. Or swords and bullets


The user gains +10 speed when emperor is active.






The gun can gain power by using the user blood Hp. For every 1 Hp he gives the user gain 1 attack point. This is only til the user reached 2/4 his Hp than this ability is automatically nuked for the user safety.
Example of the user attack and Hp both is 10 the user could take up to 5 Hp given him 15 attack stats but 5 Hp points.


Weaknesses: The gun is only as strong when going up against dark and light elements 10- attacks when going up against any other elements.

The gun if drawn must be used or it can not return to it sealed formed. This will drain the user Hp 3- every post until the user hit a target.

Once emperor form is in play the user loses 10- Defense. Since it's an all our attack based mode.

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PostSubject: Re: Bloody Rose ( Ebony)   Thu Mar 16, 2017 6:08 am

redone Bumped they last one will take time

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PostSubject: Re: Bloody Rose ( Ebony)   Thu Mar 16, 2017 6:17 am

Fix the grammar and spelling on your application, until this is done, it cannot be checked.

Prankster wrote:
Name: Bloody Rose
Type: Weapon
Class: B
Length: The gun is the size of a 40. glock
Weight: 2 lbs
Description: The gun is a very powerful weapon which can fire rounds of bullets made by the elements. Each set of rounds will have they respected effects placed on the targets. Meaning a fire round of bullets could leave the target burned or a lightening round of bullets could shock them.



Strengths: The user is not summoning his elements but they have been made for him. Each set comes with it's elements strengths.


Weaknesses: The bullets could be stopped by his elements weakness.

Stronger weapons or armour could stop the bullets. ( must be 1 rank higher than the user.)

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“The world's full of bad things.
We can fight back, not just physically, but by showing people that it's okay to keep laughing.
It's okay to mock the assholes that keep trying to make the world be worse than it is.
That's how you really take their power away.
We laugh at them because they hate it, because they want to bring us down to their level.
So we don't let that happen.
We show people that all the monsters in the world can't take away humor, fun and hope.”


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PostSubject: Re: Bloody Rose ( Ebony)   Thu Mar 16, 2017 6:21 am

yeah nothing wrong pass me up I'll wait for someone else to grade it

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