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PostSubject: Primary Skill: Bloody Rose    Wed Feb 22, 2017 5:22 pm

Skill Set Name: Dead Or Alive
Elemental Property: Light and Darkness
Stat Specialization:  N/A
Skill Set Information: The user uses his Bloody Rose to fire off powerful magical blast of light and dark magic assaults.


Passives:Allows The user to charge it's power to increase its attack.

Allows the user to connect with his life force to ensure more power.
The user is able to absorb light and dark magic.
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Skill Set Strengths: The weapon is highly dangerous to demons. 50% more damage to them.

The gun blast can not be blocked targets must avoid them if the target is not stronger then him.


Skill Set Weakness: The user can not use up his magic. This could result in him using his Hp. Which in most cases is not good.

The gun does only half damage to none demons and angelic beings.

Technique Name: Bang bang
Technique Rank D
Technique Focus Attack
Technique's Duration 1 post
Technique Description: The user fires a small blast of Light or dark magic at b.s target.
This shotbfalls under all range meters for this rank capping at it's peek.

Technique Name: Magic repeal
Technique Rank D
Technique Focus Defense
Technique's Duration 1
Technique Description: The user fires off magic shots to repeal incoming attacks.


Technique Name: Big Bang Attack
Technique Rank C
Technique Focus Attack
Technique's Duration 1 post cool down 2
Technique Description: The user charge his gun than fires fusion magic of darkness and light at his target. This attack is strong enough to knock back stronger targets. Blast a hole threw the side of a castle wall and leave his target with burn marks.


Technique Name: Rapid fire
Technique Rank C
Technique Focus Attack
Technique's Duration 2 and 4
Technique Description: The user fires up to 100 magic bullets of either light or dark magic. This could easily break a conceit wall or building down. Or leave hole in someone.

Technique Name: Big Bang Attack X2
Technique Rank B
Technique Focus Speed
Technique's Duration 1 and 3
Technique Description: The attack is a charged up version of his big bang attack. This is powerful enough to leave a hole in someone rather it kill them or not. This is sure to leave a mark.


Technique Name: Gun Gale
Technique Rank B
Technique Focus Attack, Defensive
Technique's Duration 2 and 5
Technique Description: This move attack and Defense at the same time. The user fires a laser shoot of light magic at the ground. Which in turn cause  an explosion to hit the spot the laser went. This will cause the targets to sort back so they won't get hurt. This will separate the user from them.

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PostSubject: Re: Primary Skill: Bloody Rose    Wed Feb 22, 2017 5:47 pm

Also I will like to know if I could show part of this power in the event. Not the full power but part of it. It said I could I'm making sure of it.

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PostSubject: Re: Primary Skill: Bloody Rose    Thu Feb 23, 2017 9:14 pm

Prankster wrote:
Skill Set Name: Dead Or Alive
Elemental Property: Light and Darkness


Stat Specialization:  Defensive and Offensive and heal
Skill Set Information: Conjuration- Deep within Trillion Shadow there was an ongoing war. The light and the darkness itself has been at war. War over his body since his birth. This has greatly effected Trillion good and bad. For one minute he's a bright light the next he's a emo mess. However due to the lastly event in his life. The war stopped within to fuse into something completely new. Death or life Trillion light and dark magic fuse to become one. But still differently at the same time. Like a new day and a new night but it's still the same day.
With this new power Trillion is easily able to turn someone or thing to dust or nothingness and a mere moment or post. This power is even more dangerous due to the fact it can create small to medium size spaces. This allows him to store things within it or even teleport if able. This magic was created when Trillion Shadow was at a life or death moment in the great war.
No. I legit just, don't know why you keep trying for the "Instantly turn someone to dust" and expect it to get approved man. Please, just stop that. All of this is just a no. Reword it into something different. Most of what you list here are passives and skills.


Passives:
Allows The user to detect life within 200 meters of himself.
Range is too high. If you want something like this, five meters is the max
Allows the user to connect with his Unity orbs.
Please, add some context. No one is going to know what you mean when we grade your apps. No one's keeping 100% tabs on you and everything you make and immediately knows 100% what you're talking about. What are these "Unity Orbs"?
The user is able to absorb light and dark magic to v.i.a heal.
No. You cannot have this.

Skill Set Strengths:
The user can cast light and dark magic spells at the same time. 1 in his left hand and 1 in his right.
The user can increase this skill set power when it's fused with his weapon. The Unity orbs his B class weapon.
These aren't even approved, skillset cannot/will not be approved until these are.

Skill Set Weakness:
The user can not learn any other type of magic. Besides light and dark magic.
This isn't a weakness. This applies to LITERALLY everyone else, only two elements are allowed per person unless otherwise stated.
Wind magic is highly dangerous to him.
How? There is no "Wind" magic, only Nature. How is this specifically dangerous to you? Do you suffer a debuff to your defense, offense? What?

Technique Name: Now be gone you fool
Technique Rank C
Technique Focus Attack
Technique's Duration 1 post and CDT 1
Technique Description: The user creates a blinding white light. Which the target is put into.The damage caused by this attack could easily kill a npc or pc if that person(s) is weaker then  him. Either by being neutral weaker or if hurt in a fight. This could cause a high degree of burn to his victims as well if they was to survive. Keep in mind he could only take out someone with this if they health is 1/4 it's full power pc only. With none pc if they are weaker he could end them fast.

No. No instantly killing someone, if I see this from any more of your apps I will deny them instantly. Just a headsup for future apps. Techniques and spells are based off of your Attack and enemies defense and HP. If you have, let's say, 10 Atk and your enemy has 5 HP and 5 Defense, you may get the kill off on them. But if they have 10 Defense, more than likely your enemy will just absorb the dmg without a scratch.


Technique Name: It's futile
Technique Rank C
Technique Focus Defensive
Technique's Duration 3 and CDT 4
Technique Description: The user create a personal barrier for himself. For protection this barrier can withstand any attack for 3 post if the user defense is higher than the foes attack. But if it's not it will break after 2 post.

No tanking EVERYTHING at a C Ranked. This barrier needs a health stat that is determined by either your defense or offense, and will only last a max of two posts please. Mention that you cannot move within your "Barrier" or do anything else, and that this is for yourself only.


Technique Name: Merciful no Merciless
Technique Rank C
Technique Focus (Attack, Defensive, Healing
Technique's Duration 1 post cool down 3
Technique Description: The user grabs a hold of his target stealing 1/4 of his or her health. That rule only applies to pc. However for npc the user could steal up to half of their health if the user is uninterrupted. This move could heal any wound upon the user even death threating ones due to his lineage healing power.

This is kind of out of place. It doesn't match anything you've mentioned before. It doesn't match the mechanics you've put in Skill set information, it doesn't match your elements. This ability, if you somehow work it in reasonably, will be based off of your attack, and their defense like any other skill. You attack, their defense subtracts the total damage, and the damage hits their HP. From there, we'll say you can steal 25% of the total dmg you produced to them, since this is C Ranked

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PostSubject: Re: Primary Skill: Bloody Rose    Fri Feb 24, 2017 11:09 am

see this is perfect for me Bump

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PostSubject: Re: Primary Skill: Bloody Rose    Sat Mar 04, 2017 12:42 am

Prankster wrote:
Skill Set Name: Dead Or Alive
Elemental Property: Light and Darkness
Stat Specialization:  N/A
Skill Set Information: The user uses his Bloody Rose to fire off powerful magical blast of light and dark magic assaults.


Passives:Allows The user to charge it's power to increase its attack.
How long do you charge it? How much more power does it give if you charge it?

Allows the user to connect with his life force to ensure more power.
Elaborate more. Give some specifics.

The user is able to absorb light and dark magic..
AFAIK, we are not allowing people to absorb other user's magic. So, I'm not going to approve this.
Skill Set Strengths: The weapon is highly dangerous to demons. 50% more damage to them.
50% more atk is way too high. Lower it down to 10%

The gun blast can not be blocked targets must avoid them if the target is not stronger then him.
Why can it not be blocked?


Skill Set Weakness: The user can not use up his magic. This could result in him using his Hp. Which in most cases is not good. Do you mean VP?

The gun does only half damage to none demons and angelic beings.

Technique Name: Bang bang
Technique Rank D
Technique Focus Attack
Technique's Duration 1 post
Technique Description: The user fires a small blast of Light or dark magic at b.s target.
This shotbfalls under all range meters for this rank capping at it's peek.

Sorry, none of this made any sense to me. Could you try to describe your skill better?


Technique Name: Magic repeal
Technique Rank D
Technique Focus Defense
Technique's Duration 1
Technique Description: The user fires off magic shots to repeal incoming attacks.
How would it repeal incoming attacks? I don't see you being able to push back water, fire, or various other elemental spells back just by shooting at it.


Technique Name: Big Bang Attack
Technique Rank C
Technique Focus Attack
Technique's Duration 1 post cool down 2
Technique Description: The user charge his gun than fires fusion magic of darkness and light at his target. This attack is strong enough to knock back stronger targets. Blast a hole threw the side of a castle wall and leave his target with burn marks. Leave out the actual damage you would do to them. A. I don't really see either light or dark magic leaving any sorts of burn marks, and B. your target may not take any damage at all due to the way stats work.

How long do you charge your gun for?



Technique Name: Rapid fire
Technique Rank C
Technique Focus Attack
Technique's Duration 2 and 4
Technique Description: The user fires up to 100 magic bullets of either light or dark magic. This could easily break a conceit wall or building down. Or leave hole in someone.
100 is too many even for a C Class Spell. Lower it down to 20. Stop putting the actual damage to the target, it varies based on their defense going up against your attack.

Technique Name: Big Bang Attack X2
Technique Rank B
Technique Focus Speed
Technique's Duration 1 and 3
Technique Description: The attack is a charged up version of his big bang attack. This is powerful enough to leave a hole in someone rather it kill them or not. This is sure to leave a mark.
Same as above. How long do you charge, how much more damage does it do, how many bullets do you fire?


Technique Name: Gun Gale
Technique Rank B
Technique Focus Attack, Defensive
Technique's Duration 2 and 5
Technique Description: This move attack and Defense at the same time. The user fires a laser shoot of light magic at the ground. Which in turn cause  an explosion to hit the spot the laser went. This will cause the targets to sort back so they won't get hurt. This will separate the user from them.

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